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Furthermore, he said that he had a dream and this speech has influenced the government of the U.S. because he wanted to reach the goal that every human should have the same rights.

Zu lang, teile es in 2 Sätze auf. Z.B. He is most famous for his words "I have a dream." This speech has influenced...

He organized a march on Washington to protest against the rights of blacks. 

Ähm ich glaube nicht dass er gegen die Rechte von Schwarzen demonstriert hat :)

He even won a nobel prize in 1964 as he did it that...

Holprig ausgedrückt, besser: he achieved that

UserKarina 
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 29.04.2024, 20:51

Danke! :)

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